Dec 13
6
Second Draft…
Pieces in Bloom is mixed together. I did a rewrite today that closed the gaps and made the story come together. I’ll give it another read tomorrow after I get some sleep. I’ve been so busy I haven’t had much time to fit sleep into my schedule. I like the five stories back to back, so they may stay that way which allows me to keep them as five twenty minute shorts if I want to or make it into a feature. I’ll be sending out a draft to a few others for feedback. I always like to see it through other people’s eyes and get different opinions. I am a perfectionist with everything I do from who I cast to what I write, so I will only move forward with the project if I think it is in perfect shape.